tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454743963883112604.post1482929510042490660..comments2023-06-25T06:20:15.295-07:00Comments on Creative Journey: The color of hazeMiki Willahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01903615512823465964noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454743963883112604.post-35944655537920832852008-07-20T21:28:00.000-07:002008-07-20T21:28:00.000-07:00Great painting(s). I love the mountain and fog, th...Great painting(s). I love the mountain and fog, the water and middle ground are great work. That being said, the relationship of the foreground-middle ground to the background-sky is area to consider. A suggestion to stregthen the unity of these elements would be to decrease the value of the water and adjust the land mass values. It may not take a lot but by adjusting to slightly lighter value you might be able create a more transparent relationship to these lovely areas within the painting. Very keen and adroitly executed, bravaTom Willahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02237634763205525797noreply@blogger.com